This is impressive for one evening. It was pretty enjoyable. The ending felt a bit weak, maybe because it trailed off. I would have loved to hear your live performers.. Too bad.
Good luck though!
This is impressive for one evening. It was pretty enjoyable. The ending felt a bit weak, maybe because it trailed off. I would have loved to hear your live performers.. Too bad.
Good luck though!
Thanks Michael! Hope to see you in the contest next year.
I like some of your ideas, especially what you have going on at the beginning.
I know, and I'm sure you know that an intro sequence for a film wouldn't normally be 4 minutes long. It sounds to me like you crammed a few different ideas into this piece, and they don't all work together. Keep at it!
Thanks. I'm not writing a regular intro sequence though, I wrote a main title sequence, a la any of the Spider Man movies, James Bond films, etc. (not the amazing spider man). The idea is to feed all of the major musical themes to the audience during the credits so they have something to latch onto later on. I definitely crammed a bunch of themes in there and if you think they don't work together I might have to work on my transitions. :/
4 minutes MIGHT be a tad long, but in my experience they range from about 3-5 minutes.
Thanks for the review!
Wow, so eerie! I just love the description you wrote. You are so creative.
By the end of this I could see robot zombies everywhere.
ZOMBIES??! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooo!
Good job. Very friendly and inviting. My only thing is that a lot of the reads are very similar. I'd like to hear even more energy, especially on the "long shot" commercial.
Keep up the great work!
Hahahaha. I forgot about this. I don't normally put loops up because people say "BLAM. MAKE IT LONGER!"
BLAM! WHO LOOPS AN ENTIRE SONG, I MEAN COME ON.
Amazing composition, Pierce! I can't wait to hear more.
Oh, this again!
Oh, no.
Hi, I'm Michael, and I'm an actor. I love The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones, Salad Fingers, Portlandia, and Tim and Eric.
Age 28, Male
Actor
Los Angeles, CA
Joined on 3/2/09